1st Poem

I am curious as to what you think. So please give me some feedback because I finally just let my mind float as I decided to write this poem. I am sure that the jumbled thoughts that are in my heard are expressed here in some cryptic ( not really) form or fashion. This is only called my 1st poem because I think that this is truly the first poem i wrote without any other thought than, "Write a poem from withing." .......Its a bit long but I hope you enjoy!

I feel like letting the words flow 

so simply that I'll know 

the what I am say is true 

and not just a show put on for you

I don't want to write about love

or beauty sent down form up above,

because that's not true that's not real

for self-esteem i can see the appeal, 

but I want the lust, the passion, the waves

So I can recant the ways,

That I want you, I need you, I feel you

the way that just a glance make me feel for you,

you who makes life more than just a game 

one who Id gladly stand out in the rain, with 

just to hold you close and see your face

just to see how alive i feel in this place 

wrapped in your embrace, horizontal, vertical, at a slight angle 

sitting here thinking of calling you an angel 

but I know that wont work, it never does

unless your a looks 1 percenter then that's the cause 

hopelessly romantic or hopelessly romantically frantic 

the thoughts would drive a sane man manic 

into depression with fits of rage and joy 

thoughts of bliss will only play coy 

a tug on the strings, a girl with no wings 

but still as beautiful as ever 

insistence as light as a feather  

I want to see you first 

and prepare for the worst 

I want to see you 

then be you 

I want to like you 

then lust you

and if the moment is right, and not just the hype

of me finding your favor, and seeing you later 

maybe just maybe lu can escape 

but pulled back quick for its mistake 

then spilled forth to give validation 

I guess I can love you, given my situation

Peace Out Girl Scouts